I'd like to see more pics frou frou because I'll be very honest:
One of the things I've most noticed and admired about you is how you GLOW in your scarves. Your face is lit up and you look completely comfortable in them, like a second skin.
Something of that is missing here. I don't know, I can't quite put my finger on it. The design is lovely, the color combo is really, really terrific, but....
The neck wrap is the best, so the colors definitely suit you.
Please more pics. Perhaps these first ones are dark, or maybe a dark top isn't the way to go.
I'm sorry, not very helpful I know.
You're right, it doesn't feel quite right yet . The black lines feel aggressive , yet I love the rest of it.Maybe the dark top draws the black lines out.
I try to post tomorrow evening if I can , your input is so useful, thanks so much
