First Poem ever hope you like...LOL

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Jan 11, 2010
** This is my first attempt at writing poetry. Comments are very welcome. TIA. Holly

My Bad Obsession

Designer bags are like friends
Gotta have the latest trends
Hermes, Fendi, Prada
Ooh Ahh I go gaga
Louis,Gucci,Chanel Oh my
Why stop buying why try
Blue,Green,Purple, Red
Oh but I need a new bed
I can go without rest
Till I find the newest most best
Bag of my dreams
And she screams
Why oh why hasn’t it been found
She hears this sound
Its her mind racing
She figures shes facing
Another whole level
That she might revel
In being a designer bag hoarder
And finally placing a custom order
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